Lecture notes

Research project drafts- General feedback

- 18th April - Final deadline
- Research project
-Presentation
-Blog
-One hard copy
-One CD
 Submit at Wise by 2pm

Essay feedback

sentences like, "Lack of respect has become an issue over time"  - about what?  too vague.. how much time?  shows no research

- Need to be more specific for essays, needs to factual. Interrogate your sentences
- Instead of saying, 'This proves that' - say things more like ' this suggests that'

Overview
-Referencing
-Unsubstantiaed opinion
-Lack of referencing

References- Instead of writing loads of names just write one and then put et al

Make sure your powerpoint also reflects your critically - got to be meaningful